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But back to the story... Alice is a hardworking girl that is trying to take care of her brother and pay for his much needed heart surgery. She sees an ad for a billionaire searching for a wife and decides to interview. Alice finds out soon that she is in way over her head with the Maslow family. She and Gideon seem to come to some understanding of their roles, but Alice gets a little too curious and family secrets start to unfold. And so does the romance...
A few of my issues with the book - writing was very rudimentary and the characters were no well developed. The story wasn't rich and in depth - just kind of "this happened then this." The editing was abismal. This author desperately needs an editor. Too many little convenience "all of the sudden they were in love," moments. Just some weird oddly placed nuances that made me shake my head. ...more


"Money was not what made you rich, it was family and the number of people who loved and supported you unconditionally that made you rich. Money would come and go depending on time, but family and friends stayed forever.
And that was the true wealth."
Holiday easy read, you slide through the chapters to see where it is going, a little bit predictable, but it was ok and I liked it."Money was not what made you rich, it was family and the number of people who loved and supported you unconditionally that made you rich. Money would come and go depending on time, but family and friends stayed forever.
And that was the true wealth."
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It was a quick easy read but it is in need of some serious editing and proofreading. It was full of errors which sometimes made it difficult to read.
I felt that sometimes storylines were mentioned then not mentioned again which, for me left holes in the plot leaving some weak characters. With some tweaks it has the potential to be a good book.



Reading this book was a new kind of experience for me as it was a young adult/romantic book and I don't read much of those genre. I liked the grit and determination of the protagonists. The relationship curve was very good. All the family drama made me turn the pages. The only downside was that I found the story predictable.
Some of my favorite quotes are from the book are:
A beautiful sparkle in his eyes that I had never seen bMy six-word memoir: Emotionally crazy family, love, money, belonging.
Reading this book was a new kind of experience for me as it was a young adult/romantic book and I don't read much of those genre. I liked the grit and determination of the protagonists. The relationship curve was very good. All the family drama made me turn the pages. The only downside was that I found the story predictable.
Some of my favorite quotes are from the book are:
A beautiful sparkle in his eyes that I had never seen before but never wanted it to extinguish
Calm down, it is not him talking, it's that negative emotion that is ruling his mind that is saying all sorts of nonsense...more




It had such a good set up for a beauty and the beast type story but missed it completely. Complete waste of time reading this.
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The small fact that it is set in the U.K. to start with means that Alice would not need to raise money for her brother to have surgery (he would have had it for free on the NHS - because our health service is for everyone, not those who can afford it) by way of a scheme that quite possibly violates modern slavery rules. You want th
Well I have started this and while the writing is engaging, so far it has made me cross - cleary the author has zero knowledge of the U.K. and has done zero research.The small fact that it is set in the U.K. to start with means that Alice would not need to raise money for her brother to have surgery (he would have had it for free on the NHS - because our health service is for everyone, not those who can afford it) by way of a scheme that quite possibly violates modern slavery rules. You want the surgery cost to be a thing? Base it in the USA where it as least has a slight ring of feasability... But why let a little thing like that stand in the way of a mediocre story?
I don't think I will bother with the rest.
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The story is really good. I really enjoyed the few chapters I've been able to read, it's hard to wait for the next chapter to be unlocked. The only thing I am upset is when you are waiting for the chapter to be unlocked YOU NEED to keep the page OPEN or the TIME WILL STOP until you log again; meaning that if it shows that you've been waiting 1 hour and 20 minutes you log in later on again and it will tell you another time; meaning you have to wait longer. that's really wrong..
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The plot was garbage....character development was all but nonexistent. And what the hell is with physical violence towards women being condoned?
I cannot even with this book. What a colossal waste of time.


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